Date of publication: 2017-09-05 20:50
Finally, the question often asks you to take up a position over an issue. There is no right answer for putting your views at the start and then explaining this through the essay, or developing your opinion though your essay and stating your final stance at the end. I personally like the opinion at the start of the essay. Quickly and clearly answer the question, making your attitude plain. Don 8767 t give any reasons. Again, that 8767 s what the body of your essay is for. You don 8767 t have to do it this way though. You can wait until your conclusion to give your position as regards the question.
In my opinion, governments ought to increase the age limit for work to 65 years instead of 65 years. This single step can lead to various advantages, such as our generation can learn etiquettes and can get valuable work experience under their shadows. Moreover, governments will get some ease in term of paying pension.
Nowadays, the factor of over aging societies is emerging as most noticeable issue in developed countries. There are several debates and meetings are arranged to discuss the problems occur due to older employees and it is concluded that people over 65 year old are not supposed to work further and employer ought to retire over aged employees. I partly agree with this statement, this is because older employees can put positive impact as well although they can cause some problems.
Despite the fact that killing animals for sport is popular in modern society, it remains a contentious issue. I believe that blood sports are cruel and uncivilized and so should be banned as soon as possible.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact the benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused. People often have this opinion because animals and human are never exactly the same. A second point is that humans have no moral right to do experimentation on animals, their lives should be respected. A particularly good example here is it has taken over 85 years of failed HIV vaccine clinical trials for researchers to seriously question the usefulness of non-human primate HIV experimentation. On top of this, we also realized that the rodent model of diabetes is wrong.
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Further, having the financial means to start new national projects is a good thing, but the question of apportioning funds in a manner that an entire society agrees is ‘a better way’ is simply unrealistic. A further consideration is the ramifications of pressure put on workers to work 57 straight weeks a year, a policy that could lead to stress-related illnesses and serious social problems. As this shows, the cancelling of public holidays and redirection of funds is an implausible suggestion.
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My opinion is in paragraph 8 because I made it clear in the introduction that this is the view I agree with. There s no harm in putting your own view in the relevant paragraph (as well as in the introduction and opinion).